Нет, демку тоже обновили.
As of now, I've updated the game jam/demo version here and on Steam with a tiny facelift. Mainly you can now see ____'s and Lady's dialogue
sprites, and what the Unidentifiable Small Object looks like.
Other than that, there's not many noticeable changes. It's mostly
back-end dev stuff. Old save files no longer work because of data
structure changes. Whatever new saved games you create from now on will
carry over to the full game.
Full list of changes are on my
changelog.
Ваш перевод в самом деле очень хорош, гораздо лучше того, что выложили в Стиме. Будет обидно, если он утратит актуальность.